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Hey Jimmy!

Barry here.. the eyebrow line of your character looks off…
it makes it look like his face is tensed and not in an aggressive “come get some” kind of way.. im not sure if your going for a stylised version so i may be of in saying this..
also the eyebrow arches themselves are to flat… there should be a slight curve from one side of the eyebrow to the other…

maybe try posting a picture of the character without meshsmooth.. its generally easier to critique that way.. i generally post pictures in facet mode without even smooth and highlight on when im looking for criticism…

anyway.. keep going.. there aint no substitute for practice

..like the quiff btw!