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From my non artist point of view it seems your 2D animation is fab, just need to work more on the 3D stuff.

1. Bag of Flour – Cool, beautiful

[Keep in showreel]

2. Walk cycle with gun – seems a bit off, too rigid?, Not enough shoulder sway or head bob?

[remove from showreel until improved]

3.Dog animation – very unnatural. Right front paw goes a bit limp. Should movement very stiff

[remove from showreel until improved]

4. 2D characters – lovely !

[Keep in showreel]

5.2D block walkcycle – nice

[Keep in showreel]

6. Bag of Flour – again nice

[Keep in showreel, maybe have this all in one piece with ‘1’]

7. 3D head – ok, bit basic

[Keep in showreel]

8. Run Cycle – again something seems off, head remains in one position doesn’t sway, shoulders bit rigid?

[remove from showreel until improved]

9. 2D whip – cool, want to see more!

[Keep in showreel]

10. 2D head with eyeball – very short but fine – any more of this sequence?

[Keep in showreel]

11. bag of floor – grand, I like.

[Keep in showreel, maybe have this all in one piece with ‘1’]

So maybe work on the 3D stuff a bit more (again this is just a lay person talking, I am not an artist)